Detailing Your Injuries and Losses in a Demand Letter

Your damages play a large role in determining the value of your personal injury settlement, so be sure to clearly detail all your injuries and losses in your demand letter.

After an injury, your demand letter will set the stage for settlement negotiations. After discussing how the accident happened and who may be to blame, you'll need to describe every negative consequence of the accident and how you have been affected -- your injuries, your pain and discomfort, lost income from time missed at work, and so on. Read on to learn more, and make sure to check out the sample demand letters included at the end.

Your Injuries and Treatment

In describing your injuries and treatments, do not be too shy. Emphasize your pain, the length and diffi­culty of your recovery, the negative ­effects of your injuries on your daily life, and any long-term or permanent injury -- especially if it is disabling or disfiguring, such as permanent stiffness, soreness, or scarring.

Of course, do not make things up or be overly dramatic. Insurance adjusters are regular people, who are susceptible to the kid-who-cried-wolf phe­nomenon; they will simply turn a deaf ear to claims they believe are false. To support your claim of injury, pain, and disability, use the words that appear in medical records whenever possible. Choose “official” terms over conversational language; “narrowing of disk spacing” is stronger than “strained back.”

The easiest way to describe your injuries, treat­ment, recovery, and long-term or perma­nent effects is to go step-by-step chrono­logically. ­Proceed from how the injury occurred, to your pain and what you did about it immediately after the accident, through all the medical examinations, diag­noses, and treat­ments you received, through all the stages of your pain and disability during recovery. End with any long-term or permanent effects.

Other Losses

Most of what you recover for your injuries is compen­sation for pain, discomfort, and disrup­tion in your daily life. But sometimes you suffer extra or unusual discomforts, embarrassments, inconveniences, or losses. Review your notes to remind yourself of the kinds of things you went through, or had to miss or give up, because of your injuries. Mention them in your demand letter, and do not be shy about saying how important those things are to you.

Medical Expenses

Immediately following your description of all your medical treatments, include in the demand letter a list of each medical provider who treated you and the total amount charged by each. If you were treated by an HMO or other prepaid plan, list the charges it provided you with in place of actual bills. List all medical costs, regardless of whether you paid them, your insurance or your employer’s insurance paid them, or they were part of a health plan. Make sure the list matches your medical billing records, copies of which you will be sending to the insurance company along with the demand letter.

If you were in a vehicle accident and your no-fault insurance coverage requires you to meet an expense threshold, include in your demand letter a list of your medical expenses along with copies of the bills. This means you are notifying the insurance company of your right to pursue your claim against its insured.

Lost Income

Make a brief statement of the amount of time you missed from work because of your injuries, and refer to whatever letter you have from your employer verifying your pay and missed time. Then multiply the time missed by your rate of pay to get a total figure for lost income. You do not have to explain why you were unable to work. If the insurance com­pany wishes to challenge your claim that you were unable to work, it will do so during negotiations.

Don’t try to convince the insurer in your ­demand letter that your injuries made you miss work. Lobbying too strongly may signal that this is a subject for disagreement and negotiation. And you do not have to discuss whether you took sick leave, vacation time, or unpaid time off. The time you missed and the amount you are normally paid are the only things that matter.

If you are irregularly employed or self-employed, explain how you arrived at the total figure for lost income. Your income is impossible to predict exactly, so you do not have to claim that the figure you give is exact. Just explain what basis you used for ­figuring your rate of income -- a weekly amount based on your previous year’s income as shown on your tax return, for exam­ple, or a monthly amount based on the months imme­diately preceding the accident -- and refer to whatever documents you have to back up that income and your missed work.

If the insurance company wants to dispute your figures or the method you used, let it bring up the matter during negotiations. Don’t worry about con­vincing the insurer in your demand ­letter that the method you are using is the best or only method possible.

Supporting Documents

Along with your demand letter, send the insur­ance company copies of documents, records, letters, bills, and other proof of things you describe in your letter. Keep the originals for your own files. Although no one’s claim has all of the docu­ments listed below, use the following list to remind yourself of the documents you do have that might support your claim. When you send these documents along with your ­demand letter, arrange them in the same order in which you refer to them to in the letter.

Supporting documents to enclose with your demand letter might include:

  • a police report, copy of a traffic law or building code, or any other document supporting your contention that the insured person violated a law or legal rule, such as a statement or report about prior accidents
  • photos of the accident scene
  • witness statements supporting your description of how the accident happened
  • photos of your injury
  • your medical records, arranged according to each medical provider -- that is, all your records from Dr. X together in chronological order, then all records from Dr. Y
  • bills, billing records, or lists of charges for all medical treatment—regardless of who paid for it—arranged chronologically by medical provider in the same order as the medical records
  • documents showing your income loss, and
  • documents showing other losses you suf­fered, such as the invitation to a ­wedding you missed, or the schedule of the dance classes you were forced to miss and will not be able to attend for another six months.

The more documentation you have to support your claim, the better positioned you'll be to negotiate your injury settlement.

Example Demand Letters

See our page of example demand letters to get a sense of what they look like, what to include, and why.

This article is an excerpt from the book, How to Win Your Personal Injury Claim, by Attorney Joseph Matthews (Nolo).

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